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Re: Mount Hermon Reminds Me Who Walks on Water - a poem

Marcus — Thu, 10 Apr 2008 17:01:39 -0000

Ann, you are kind. Thanks.

Re: Mount Hermon Reminds Me Who Walks on Water - a poem

Marcus — Thu, 10 Apr 2008 16:50:28 -0000

L.L., Peter is three. The real person was a girl. Her name was probably not Peter. : ) She was also not three. But I like the number three.

Re: Mount Hermon Reminds Me Who Walks on Water - a poem

L.L. Barkat — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 10:21:14 -0000

I just noticed you have a podcast feed. That's so cool. (For our listening pleasure!). Now, please tell me what the "three" means in your poem (I'm here, caught between the dip and the recovery).

Re: Mount Hermon Reminds Me Who Walks on Water - a poem

L.L. Barkat — Tue, 25 Mar 2008 14:19:46 -0000

I always like your poetry. In this one, I wasn't sure what the "three" referred to. I did figure "Peter" was some novice flyer, so it was fun to hear that it was a girl (woman?).

I wasn't sure about the sense of non-closure at the end, but then I'm thinking that in some genius way it captures the uncertainty of flight or perhaps that middle place one experiences between the fall and the recovery.

Re: Mount Hermon Reminds Me Who Walks on Water - a poem

Ann @Holy Experience — Mon, 24 Mar 2008 22:44:04 -0000

May I add but one word to Amy's pronouncement?
It's done... *well.*

Glad you made it home...