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Re: Ode on Business Travel - a poem for Friday

goodwordediting — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 20:21:20 -0000

Thanks, you know I was an exchange student in high school? Changed my life.

Melissa — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 20:35:12 -0000

this takes me back to high school classroom days. thanks for sharing! it's quite pretty.

Micah — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 12:38:50 -0000

Having replaced days in the saddle with days on the road I appreciate the "hoof stirred silt" part.

Marcus — Mon, 04 Feb 2008 12:54:34 -0000

ESI and L.L., thanks. My poetry is so personal, I always hesitate a bit to post it. I'm glad it meant something to you.

L.L. Barkat — Sat, 02 Feb 2008 08:47:32 -0000

As always, love your poem. Especially the kracken-like branches. Great sounds throughout!

every square inch — Sat, 02 Feb 2008 08:33:53 -0000

I often feel the same way. Business travel gets old doesn't it?